Tuesday, 9 December 2014



  1. On this and http://breakrpg.blogspot.com/2014/12/battle-princess-calling-illustration-in.html I think moving the "This calling is good for..." text to another paragraph would improve readability.

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    1. It does seperate the in game flavor stuff with the "hey player" meta stuff, I've no objections!

    2. I haven't updated the "Armour:All" bit either.
      But this is just a test.

      The big problem with a 'visual' layout (rather than pure text) is that some design elements need to be presented in a block to make sense. Adding the extra paragraph break to the above copy as you suggest might shunt the table over to the next page and leave an awkward white space. Of course we'll edit and tweak to prioritise comprehension but I may request the occasional copy to fit request from the author too!

    3. Also should down grade chib armour (as looks to heavy for specialist allowance)
      Rey, anything else you'd like to see here? Might swap acrobat thief's pole for trained pet (visually conflicts with chib stilts)

    4. Honestly, I think it's pretty grand. You've done a great job representing a broad spectrum of character types with these last few pictures, I'm just beaming over here.